to ZHeN
I checked your stuff out and,I'm sorry,but it sounds really weak.You're calling yourself a jazz player,but you have no jazz vocabulary,there's no melodic development,your rhythm is all over the place and technically you're far from perfect(it becomes especially clear when you're trying to play everything with a pick)
It looks like you're listening to all the right things,but maybe it's time to start transcribing some of them?Forget about Metheny for now,it's kinda early for you,Charlie Christian and Wes Montgomery should be your guys at this point.
Break a leg!